Two Revision Strategies

Well, my group did not do the 1st strategy correctly, so it was not as useful as it was supposed to be. But, it was helpful still some. The second strategy was more useful. It helped to just take some time to read through my  paper and point out the things I needed to fix. It also helped to have ideas of what to look for. The list of requirements helped a lot! It gave me a better idea of how I should be writing my paper and what the reader should be getting out of it.